Not so perfect pitch

Spent most of the day fiddling with a possible Pigeon pitch over at Betsy Lerner’s—I know I’m jumping the gun, but that’s been my favorite (read only) form of exercise lately—and so have nothing much to share, except that I clearly need to gather more information on pitches versus queries versus one-line blurbs versus summaries.

Or, quite possibly, finish the book first . . .

But everyone so far has been very helpful.  One person cooked up a terrific example of a pitch using the bare premise I’d offered, except it’s nothing like the story I’m writing. 

Damn it.