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While Clyota—accompanied by the omnipresent Pressman—is regrouping at Cristina’s, someone tries to override the Security Door code.
Luckily, the intruder didn’t know about the child safety locks—and he wasn’t expecting Clyota. It took her more than six sentences to subdue this guy, so let’s skip to the inevtable aftermath . . .
I took the time to rub my knee—I was going to have to start wearing body armor twenty-four seven—then rolled him over. He was wearing a white shirt, now stained maroon, and a dark tie, and for a dreadful moment, I thought I would have to tell Christina that I’d knocked out her husband.
But the face around the bloodied, broken nose wasn’t Harry’s. Despite the damage, it looked familiar. He stirred, and I looked around for something to tie his hands.
A restraint strip appeared in front of my eyes and I glanced up at the Pressman, whose face was as grim as I’d ever seen it.
I rolled the limp intruder back onto his stomach, and secured his hands.
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Very suspenseful six! Definitely have me curious as to who this guy is that looks so familiar to her. Looking forward to more.
Thanks! I’m wondering where the Pressman is keeping those restraint strips, myself . . . 🙂
Dying to know if she knows who this intruder is…intriguing six for sure!
Thanks, Christine. I’m hoping I can figure out a six sentence answer to that question next week . . .
Excellent detail. Very visual.
That’s a huge compliment, coming from someone with your talent, Cara—thank you!
Hmm, I wonder who he is. Always look forward to your sixes. 🙂
I like yours, too, Jessica—thanks!
I’m really kind of interesting in the averted scenario. Clyota telling her sister, “Um, I kinda beat the shit out of your hubby.” But this is a great 6. The grim face on the Pressman was a surprise actually.
That would be hilarious, but Cly’s in enough trouble as it is. 😀
The Pressman has hidden depths (I hope).
I love a good mystery moment like this! Way to go Clyota!
There’s a line in there where she thinks, “He had some moves, but he wasn’t Library-trained.” 😀
Cue the scary music! I love the hint that she knows him but just can’t place the face. Good stuff today!
Thanks, Silver! I liked your six, too—so romantic.
Loved the moment of angst when she thought it was her BIL! But I wonder why he looks familiar? Great teaser!
Best friend’s husband, actually, but that’s the way her luck has been running lately. 🙂
Intriguing – wonder why he looks familiar, and why is the Pressman looking so grim? Hurry up, next Sunday, I want to read more!
Thanks, Paula!
Not too quickly—I have to figure out which six answer everyone’s questions . . . 🙂
This guy knows her mother, doesn’t he?
Everyone knows her mother, sort of . . . But not directly. 🙂
Clyota is such a badass.
Yes. Yes she is. 😀
Not Harry, but who? And I had to grin at the “childroof.” What they really are is adult-proof.
You have that right, Sue Ann! I haven’t been able to open the center cabinet in our bathroom for five years . . .
Very intriguing and suspenseful! At least the familiar intruder wasn’t who she thought she was at first.
True, Carrie-Anne. That would have been . . . awkward. 😀
I love that the Pressman looks grim; that has got to be an interesting expression on his face. And it’s always enjoyable to see Clyota take care of herself.
He’s usually neutral, isn’t he? Or supposed to be—for a disinterested observer, he meddles a lot . . . 😉