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This week, Clyota and the Pressman are in a cab, carrying her mother’s lockbox to a place where they can examine the contents without interruption. On the way, they discuss the possibility that the intruder they left trussed up at Christina’s—one John Anderson-Smith—will actually stay in jail this time.
“Pity you didn’t save the courts the effort,” he said.
My first reaction was on the tip of my tongue when I remembered that everything I said would be on record. “I’m a librarian,” I said, finally. “We don’t use unnecessary lethal force.”
“That idealism will come in handy,” he said, “at your murder trial.”
Who knew Pressmen could be so pissy?
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LOL! I love that last line! (That “poster” / “slogan” is hysterical, also.) Thanks for the laughs this early a.m.
Thanks!
And thanks for all the great info in your post today—definitely something to think about.
Loved the dialogue…especially that last line 🙂
Thanks, Christine. Is it Godiva-worthy? 😀
Love the Pressman– they have such a great dynamic!
I’m pleased with the way their relationship grew, especially considering I had no idea what to do with him when he showed up. 🙂
A good thing she held her tongue. Nice six! 🙂
She’s learning, Jessica! Thanks. 🙂
“I’m a librarian,” I said, finally. “We don’t use unnecessary lethal force.” Funny line!
It’s funny, ’cause it’s true. 😀
The Pressman’s dialogue is so edgy and rough. She needs to smack ’em one good. 🙂
Don’t think she hasn’t thought about it, Carrie! 🙂
Wish I knew just what a metal librarian was–the ones I know wouldn’t even think of using lethal force.
There’s a bullet called a Full Metal Jacket, which has a soft core around a hard shell. It seemed to fit the character.
This story is set in an alternate timeline—many things are militarized here.
Pissy pressman. Grat alliteration and a super excerpt.
Thanks, Elaine. 🙂
He’s not pissy. Just disappointed with the revolving door of our court systems, which I doubt will ever change. But Clyota knows better than to put her boot in her mouth, even for the coolest Pressman.
True, Lisa, on all counts. 🙂
Love the sense of humor especially that Librarians don’t use lethal force – yeah, right! lol
Well . . . we don’t! 😀
Great six! Love her wit. 🙂
Thanks, Lorraine. 🙂
I love the back and forth between them. The Pressman has a real personality, in spite of not being a human.
Thanks, Carrie-Anne.
He was a bit more sarcastic than I’d thought he’d be, but I think it suits him. 🙂
LOL! That was a great comeback. Intriguing six!
Thanks, Sarah.
My characters always find the snarkiest things to say . . . at least by the third draft, anyway. Fourth, tops. 🙂