Poetry Wednesday: A Swift Deluge for Downith

After reading last week’s poem, which painted snow in a more forgiving light than I usually view it, my friend Downith, who appears to have a Canadian’s philosophical disregard for the frozen white stuff, mentioned “the ever-present, soul-destroying rain” she’s been enduring in England for . . . almost as long as I’ve known her, actually.

Naturally, I took her comments as a challenge to find the happiest, most joyful poem about rain that I possibly could without suffering from sugar-shock. And I did, indeed, find such a poem—a veritable syrup-free celebration of precipitation, it is.

But I’m not going to share it with you today, because it’s a poem about spring rain and depressed the crap out of me.

Turns out, Downith was right—there just aren’t any happy, happy, joy, joy poems about winter rain, or not when it doesn’t leave the world encased in diamond-ice, but just makes the snow slushy and slippery and fills the visibly widening potholes with all sorts of yuck.

But there is at least one terrible, awful, nasty poem about English rain that will allow Downith to revel in her disgust and therefore, I hope, make her feel better through sheer validation.

Since Dr. Swift—that canny cannibal—wrote it, how could it miss?

A Description of a City Shower
(Jonathan Swift)

Careful observers may foretell the hour
(By sure prognostics) when to dread a shower:
While rain depends, the pensive cat gives o’er
Her frolics, and pursues her tail no more.
Returning home at night, you’ll find the sink
Strike your offended sense with double stink.
Oil puddle
 If you be wise, then go not far to dine;
You’ll spend in coach hire more than save in wine.
A coming shower your shooting corns presage,
Old achès throb, your hollow tooth will rage.
Sauntering in coffeehouse is Dulman seen;

He damns the climate and complains of spleen.

Meanwhile the South, rising with dabbled wings,
A sable cloud athwart the welkin flings,
That swilled more liquor than it could contain,
And, like a drunkard, gives it up again.
Brisk Susan whips her linen from the rope,
While the first drizzling shower is born aslope:
Such is that sprinkling which some careless quean
Flirts on you from her mop, but not so clean:
You fly, invoke the gods; then turning, stop
To rail; she singing, still whirls on her mop.
Not yet the dust had shunned the unequal strife,
But, aided by the wind, fought still for life,
And wafted with its foe by violent gust,
’Twas doubtful which was rain and which was dust.
Ah! where must needy poet seek for aid,
When dust and rain at once his coat invade?
Sole coat, where dust cemented by the rain
Erects the nap, and leaves a mingled stain.

Now in contiguous drops the flood comes down,
Threatening with deluge this devoted town.Unbrella death
To shops in crowds the daggled females fly,
Pretend to cheapen goods, but nothing buy.
The Templar spruce, while every spout’s abroach,
Stays till ’tis fair, yet seems to call a coach.
The tucked-up sempstress walks with hasty strides,
While seams run down her oiled umbrella’s sides.
Here various kinds, by various fortunes led,
Commence acquaintance underneath a shed.
Triumphant Tories and desponding Whigs
Forget their feuds, and join to save their wigs.
Boxed in a chair the beau impatient sits,
While spouts run clattering o’er the roof by fits,
And ever and anon with frightful din
The leather sounds; he trembles from within.
So when Troy chairmen bore the wooden steed,
Pregnant with Greeks impatient to be freed
(Those bully Greeks, who, as the moderns do,
Instead of paying chairmen, run them through),
Laocoön struck the outside with his spear,
And each imprisoned hero quaked for fear.


Now from all parts the swelling kennels flow,
And bear their trophies with them as they go:
Filth of all hues and odors seem to tell
What street they sailed from, by their sight and smell.
They, as each torrent drives with rapid force,
From Smithfield or St. Pulchre’s shape their course,
And in huge confluence joined at Snow Hill ridge,
Fall from the conduit prone to Holborn Bridge.
Sweepings from butchers’ stalls, dung, guts, and blood,
Drowned puppies, stinking sprats, all drenched in mud,
Dead cats, and turnip tops, come tumbling down the flood.

Well, Duchess?


Image of  “Oil puddle” courtesy of Roger McLassus, via Wikimedia Commons.

Image of “Rain in Kolkata” courtesy of Monster Eagle via Wikimedia Commons.

Image of the dead umbrella courtesy of me, because it was mine, dammit.


8 thoughts on “Poetry Wednesday: A Swift Deluge for Downith

  1. Yeah, winter rain is a hard sell. All I have is this:

    It’s raining out there, it’s cold and miserable. Let’s stay indoors, snuggle up with a book, drink some cocoa/tea/coffee, and listen to the rain patter on the windows.

    I wonder if there’s a poem about that feeling somewhere? 🙂

    • There probably is, but there are copyright considerations—and not many old, dead poets were snugglers. Or drinkers of hot cocoa. Poor sods.

      If you’d like to give it a try, though Caitlin, I’d love to see it!

        • Rainy Winter Day

          Frigid rain stabs at exposed skin,
          clammy, overcast skies huddle
          over winter-gray plants,
          and muddy puddles obscure their depths, waiting
          for a careless foot.
          Let’s stay inside and read,
          wrapped in a plush blanket,
          curled in a cozy chair,
          with the warm companionship
          of a sleeping cat.
          We’ll sip from steaming mugs of cocoa,
          listen to rain patter on the windowpanes,
          leaves rustle, and wind howl,
          a song of the chill and damp
          we’re not a part of today.

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