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We met Tom’s partner, Turner, last week, when he walked into the agency while Tom was busy subduing a belligerent visitor.
I’ve skipped a couple of sentences between that and this, so I can share that much more Turner.
Turner walked past me to the desk, stepping over the blood with more care than I would—then again, even if I hadn’t been plowing most of my paycheck back into the agency, I wouldn’t have shelled out on my whole wardrobe what he did on shoes.
My guest’s ears elongated and I heard his claws scrabble on the wood. I pressed the gun harder. “Pull it back in,” I said, “or I’ll blow your brains all over your chinny, chin, chin.”
“He means it,” Turner said. The gun drawer squeaked. “That’s why we can’t have carpet.”
The scratching stopped and the ears relaxed their lobes.
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In Tom’s defense, one wouldn’t want to wear Dolce & Gabbana to a werewolf attack. Or even J. Press.
In Turner’s defense, he doesn’t spend quite that much on clothes, but he makes it all look like he does. Possibly by avoiding werewolf attacks.
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Image of the left half of a pair of frankly gorgeous oxfords in green mist calf from the Rothley Collection of John Lobb was located at GQ (where else?).
I take it Turner is used to shifters.
Turner is unflappable, but, yes, he’s come across werewolves before. He is Not Impressed. 🙂
“That’s why we can’t have carpet.” That cracked (quacked?) me up. I really can’t wait to read this one — it is so much fun!
Thanks, Paula. Turner walks a fine line between wit and wiseass, so he gets a lot of good lines. 😀
The carpet comment was really convincing after how he took care of his shoes. Nice one!
Thanks, Linda. 🙂
Love Turner’s nonchalant backup of Tom’s threat.
Thanks, Carol. He figures Tom knows what he’s doing—or at least he wouldn’t show doubt in front of the Big Bad. 😀
Haha. Basically “this is why we can’t have nice things”. Love it.
Yep. Thanks! 🙂
Allen Edmonds, maybe?
Yeah, the carpet remark was a great line!
Edmonds’ Park Avenue line is about right—or at least it’s about $1,500 in the right direction! 🙂
Thanks, Chip!
Sophisticated humor in this snippet. Good writing.
No one has ever said that about my humor before, Chamaine. Thanks! 😀
Dolce & Gabbana and werewolves, that’s quite an intriguing combination. 🙂 Nice snippet!
Dolce & Gabbana and werewolves—oh my! 😀
Thanks!
Exciting snippet, love the comment about the shoes and the attitude!
Thanks, Gemma! 🙂
Nice! Love the line about the carpet. Great snippet, Sarah. 😀
Thanks, Siobhan! 🙂
I love this story so hard! Gotta love a man who makes it look like he spends more than he earns on shoes. Especially one with such aplomb!
But Tom’s no slouch in this snippet either. Can’t wait to see more of these guys (and yes, I’m shipping them even though I know it’s probably not that kind of story :)).
Turner is awesome. He knows it, but it doesn’t detract much. 🙂
So far, Tom doesn’t have a real love interest in this story—to be honest, I’m not sure what his inclinations are, except he’s probably not ace. But, yeah, Turner, no. Sorry. 😉
Thanks Charley! And congratulations on Birds—SUCH a good book!
Thank you, Sarah! *blows kisses*
I thoroughly enjoy this story and every little snippet you share. Very noir in tone but with that great sense of humor! More please.
Thank you, Veronica! 🙂
It’s coming slowly—I’m having to do a remarkable amount of research for this one—but it’s coming!
I also love the comment about the carpet.
Thanks, Carrie-Anne! 🙂
That was perfect!
Really? Thanks, Gem! 🙂
“That’s why we can’t have carpet.” This cracked me up!
Thanks, Brandi! 😀
People take you seriously when you look like you have money, but I think I’d take the practical approach, too.
I hope that wood has a good sealant on it!
Me, too, Caitlin! 🙂
We’ll get to the floors in a few paragraphs!
That’s why we can’t have carpet. So funny. I love the shoe. My husband wore those to work for years. I bet I can still find a pair in his closet.
So did mine, Elaine—though not quite that expensive! 🙂
Love the banter, especially the attitude. 🙂
Thanks, Karen! 🙂
Love the carpet comment! Great snippet. Can’t wait for more.
Thanks, Tina!
I LOVE that first paragraph… such great stuff. And the line, “That’s why we can’t have carpet”, is just perfect.
Thanks, Jeff! 🙂
I just love the humor you toss into your writing! lol, the chinny chin chin is good!
Thanks, Teresa! 🙂