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Having killed two Evil Minions—and placed them under an electronically-based preservation field, which I’m hoping everyone will take on faith—Reynard decides to have some breakfast, as you do.
Since he is a Pressman, whose cyber-implants run on both electricity and dense biofuel, he does not waste his time with cornflakes.
He is my hero in all sorts of ways, is Reynard. . . .
Reynard stepped over the body on his way to the kitchen.
I followed him. “We need to report this.”
“Yes,” he said, “but it would be somewhat inconvenient to do so before your trial.” He went to the fridge and removed several items with little nutritional value, including two flavors of ice cream, a can of whipped cream, and a large jar of bright red maraschino cherries. “A full report and recording has been sent to the Police on time delay,” he said, taking a large bowl down from a cupboard, “triggered for twenty minutes after your trial is underway—I will pay any levied fines.” He looked up and caught me staring. “Would you care for some toast?”
I bet Reynard would like bannanas foster.
Nice 8!
Probably! He loves Chunky Monkey ice cream.
(seriously—chapter twelve)
Now I’m hungry! Banana split?
Yes, please! My Fiber One just isn’t doing the job this morning. 😀
Oh a delicious snippet! That pic made me hungry! I like Reynard, too.
Reynard is one of my favorite characters–and his eating habits are pure wish-fulfillment!
Oh you’re right about that.
This is a perfect excerpt to read after I just had over 26 hours without any food! Who wouldn’t want ice-cream for breakfast?
I don’t need to go that long to want ice cream for breakfast!
(are you okay?)
Yeah, I was just fasting for Yom Kippur. I actually love fasting, but it’s nice to get to eat again at the end!
>Slaps forehead<
Of course! My cousin and I were discussing Yom Kippur Thursday (her side of the family is Jewish—our widowed grandparents remarried each other well before either of us were born) and I still forgot.
Pass the Atonement, please!
Definitely my kind of hero – not just the fact that he’ll enjoy ice cream for breakfast, but that he’s willing to bend the rules a little.
He’s not supposed to . . . But he has a major stake in all this, too.
Toast? Forget toast, I want all the good stuff he’s having! Really love this story and another excellent excerpt today for sure.
I”m with you, Veronica, but Clyota has Ideas about nutrition and proper breakfast foods that certainly didn’t come from me.
Let’s see… ice cream sundae for breakfast, nonchalant attitude about dead body in the living room, situation under control — I like him!
He’s one of a kind, all right (though I have another character in another thing who is becoming a tad Reynardish—is that allowed?).
I love this guy. Like, really love him. Ice cream over a dead body. NO PROBLEM! Everything I’ve seen of this story is amazeballs!
Amazeballs? Awesome! Thanks, Sarah. 🙂
What a character. Pass me the ice cream and hold the dead body, lol. 🙂
Hey,self-defense takes a lot out of a guy! 🙂
NO,I’ll have what he’s having!! Great subtle humor. 🙂
Me, too! Thanks, Gem!
Ice cream, the breakfast of champions! Love it. Excellent eight! Gave me a smile.
Thanks, Millie! That’s what I was hoping for. 🙂
Wow, isn’t he the cool customer. I hope it works out the way he’s planned.
He is, and it does. More or less . . .
Ouch, the sugar rush! I’d take the maraschino cherries. And he offers her toast, which I think is a nice touch.
I don’t think I’d last three days eating like he does, but it would be fun for the first two, I think! 😀
Haha! Breakfast of champions 😉 Excellent snippet, Sarah! 🙂
Thanks, Teresa. 😀
I love that he’s willing to bend the rules. And I love his breakfast! Yum!
You should see his afternoon snacks, Karen—he might be a bit of a stress eater . . . 😉
Why offer toast when there’s other good stuff? lol Good excerpt!
Good point, Sandra. 😀 Thanks!
Lots of carbs and fat–my R’il’noids would like that when they’re doing heavy esper work. But their eating habits are wish-fulfillment.
So are Reynard’s, Sue Ann—dairy isn’t as kind to me as it once was . . .
I love how he casually offers her toast while he’s about to have an awesome sundae in the works. great 8 with dialogue and action of the hero
Thanks, Michelle! 🙂 I wouldn’t pick toast over a sundae, either, but in the past, Cly’s been kind of a stickler for the nutrition pyramid . . .
Who wants toast when you can have an ice-cream sundae for breakfast! 🙂
I like how you think, Anne! 😀
They are going to have toast and ice cream, with a body on the floor?
Wow I would never had thought of that.
Two bodies, really. I’m a bit suprised myself . . .
So, he ‘archived’ the bodies?
I’m pretty sure I’d prefer ice cream to milk with my cereal!
Ha! What would that be . . . 393?
Cereal and ice cream can be yummy—Cocoa Pebbles are useless as cereal, but great as a topping!
Everyone could use a friend like Reynard once in a while.
Nice snippet! 🙂
Too true, Charley! How does that go? A friend will help you move, a good friend will help you move bodies, and your best friend will offer you breakfast on the way home? 😀