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Once again, I forgot to sign up for Six Sentence Sunday in time this week—I’m blaming the holidays, this time, instead of my faulty brain—so an extra thank you to you all for coming by!
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I’m skipping ahead a chapter or two, because it occurred to me that spilling the mystery of the birthday card wasn’t a good idea, if I ever want anyone to buy the book, supposing I can get my act together—New Year’s Resolution, anyone?
Clyota and Reynard, the Pressman, need a secure ‘Net connection to test out their theory about the papers in the lockbox. So they head to the Library . . . where Clyota is reminded that Librarians and Pressmen often mix like napalm and gasoline:
It was strange, coming into the Library as a Patron, going through the weapons detector, putting my carryall through the sensor. It felt wrong, alien—like seeing Alice from the viewpoint of the Looking Glass.
Patricia at the Customer Service Desk waved at me as I passed, nudging Thomas with her elbow. He glanced up, registered my presence, and nodded. Then they saw the Pressman.
Patricia stiffened to attention, and while Thomas did not actually go for his weapon, his hand did hover near it.
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I love the tension here. There’s so much in so few words 🙂
Thanks, Wendy—once again, I forgot to sign up in time, so thanks for stopping by!
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I like it Very intriguing. You have me wondering why Pressman and libraries don’t match.
There’s an explanation, Cara, but it doesn’t quite fit into six sentences. 🙂
Very intriguing. A lot of questions raised. Nice six!
Thank you!
I love the comparison of viewing Alice from the perspective of the Looking Glass–she feels so out of place and we feel it, too. Especially when her guest makes her co-workers want to pull a weapon. A fantastic start to the rising tension.
Thanks, Lisa–except for the weaponry, this is me the last time I dropped into work with Watson to pick up a book. 🙂
Great analogy here “It felt wrong, alien—like seeing Alice from the viewpoint of the Looking Glass.” I’ve had that feeling before, where you’re on the other side of something than you’d normally be… Great 6, lots of tension
Thank you, Angela. I’m two chapters into Beer and Groping. It’s fun!
Yikes! Shootout at the library. Was caught by the “Alice from the viewpoint of the Looking Glass” too:)
Yeah, librarians are for privacy and pressmen . . . aren’t. Thanks, Eleri. 🙂
Intriguing six, and love the analogy of Alice and the Looking Glass.
Thanks—looks like I’ll be keeping that one. 😀
Great six! Love her reaction to being on the other side, and how everyone reacts to them. Lots of tension!
Thanks, Lorraine. Tension is one of those things I’m working on . . .
Oh, I know that feeling. I’ve done that at a place I used to work. Felt weird being on the other side of the counter. Great six! 🙂
It really does . . . I always feel guilty for not helping people, even though it’s my day off!
Ooh! Love the tension. Should be an interesting rest of the scene.
I hope so, Kate! 😀
Great tension and I really wonder what is is about pressmen and libraries.
Pressmen record people and librarians have a thing about patron privacy. Plus, you know—history.
Great suspense.
Thanks, Taryn.
Super suspense!
I love the tension and suspense in this scene. I agree about it feeling weird to go to a workplace when you’re not working, or after you no longer work there.
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“Tune in next week, true believers . . . ” 😉
He must make quite an impression! Love the tension — well played. And the blog looks fantastic!
Thank you twice! 🙂